January 30, 2013
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Rage…
Frustration turns to anger
Anger morphs into an uncontrollable rage
Bringing about the tears that flow so easily
Shaking from the screams that echo in my head
It’s all I can do to keep from winding up dead
The pounding of my heart
The blood rushing to my head
Transforms me from what was once subdued
The lies you told
The years you stole
Ripped from my hands
But I will return
Stronger than iron
With a battle cry that will shake the ground
Silence and time are your enemies now
For when I come
The only thing you’ll ever see
Is the shine of the blade before it turns my favorite shade of red
Comments (10)
Powerful piece.
Now that is one scary piece!
Now, THAT, is what I call impressive and influential!
excellent
Talk about emotions on edge. This is one very strong piece, Storm. Excellently done. A story all of it’s own and I don’t think I would like to be facing that blade. Keep up the good work, little lady.
Know you are in thoughts & prayers, my dear. I may not visit often, but you are never far from my mind. Take care, cuz I care.
Reminds me of Lithium by Evanescence
@Journal2myself - thank you I needed to get it off my chest
@ccrider17 - I was in a really scary place yesterday, if I didn’t voice myself this way I don’t know if I would have lost it
@VersesOfSincerity - Thank you, I was just really really angry lol
@godfatherofgreenbay - thank you so much
@ChainBracelets - thanks, I love Evanescence
@wyckdstorm - Then it’s good you got it out. Hope today is much better, and that you and the fur babies are doing well.
@MzSilver - Thank you, you really are just the sweetest person I know here. I’ve been off Xanga for a bit dealing with life and yesterday I just needed to explode..lol. Guess it was better exploding with words here that face to face, that wouldn’t have been pretty. Hope all is well with you. I really need to get back into xanga mode and play catch up!
@wyckdstorm - Life happens, sweety & not always in a good way. What’s important is taking care of you, Xanga is only a side line in the whole scheme of things. Have a great remainder of your week & an even bette weekend, my dear. Good to see you.